Smash School/YMMV

• Ass Pull: Anna pressing "bdown" suddenly causes a Smash Ball to appear, which is conviently needed to stop the skyquake.
• Non Sequitur Scene: Master Hand randomly attacks Woe's bus. With his hand.
• Designated Hero: Anna and Woe don't really do anything that's remotely heroic, aside from stopping a skyquake and killing Master Hand, which is then balanced by Anna killing Mr. Collins (the LA teacher), and Woe killing Olimar.
• Idiot Plot: Need I say more?
• Level Breaker: Despite the utter lack of any sort of "drama" in the story, sonicluvr still somehow manages to jar the reader out of the story with Woe's apparent death.
• Mary Sue: Woe and Anna are definately this.
  • Jerk Sue: These two are complete jerkasses to everyone (not that everyone else are angels, per se).
• Narm: The huge amount of spelling and grammar errors, coupled with the ridiculousness of the plot kills any sort of real drama. A shame considering that sonicluvr seems to be attempting to write a Dark Fic. Diabolical Pie seems to be much better at avoiding Narm.
• Relationship Sue: Averted. The one thing sonicluvr has done right this whole time was not to force Sonic into a relationship with Anna, instead chosing to make a Palette Swap copy instead, no doubt saving the sanity of countless Sonic fans everywhere.
• Possession Sue: Sonic's few appearences seem to suggest that he is this to Woe.