Lost in Atmos

Lost in Atmos is a Storm Hawks Fanfiction written by three mildly retarded Australian High School Students. The story begins with Fi stumbling across an enchanted Storm Hawks streaming site, and accidentally flinging herself and her two friends Mel and Rach into the world of Atmos....a couple of kilometres above ground.

Luckily the Condor was passing by, and they end up faceplanting onto the roof.

After they figure out what the hell just happened, the invading Australians then proceed to pretty much piss off every single citizen of Atmos.

It can be found here:

Character List (Not including Canon Characters)

• Fi: Pretty much a female Vince Noir. The whole thing is her fault.
• Mel: A rabid Deidara fangirl with a tea addiction. Has a tendency for violence, and HATES romance with a passion.
  • ”Violence isn’t always the answer....but it’s always a safe choice”
  • ”Remember kids, you can’t spell ‘Slaughter’ without ‘Laughter’!”
• Rach: Researches the different breeds of fangirl and works in Coles. Had a fling with a character named Drake for whatever reason.
• Jess: The most normal of the Australians BY FAR. Sensible, and to be honest is almost an aristocratic English person.
  • Jess: “I’m not English! I was one of two babies born that day in a country town! I’m as Australian as you can get!”
  • Mel: “You don’t like Vegemite. You’re not an Aussie!”
  • Fi: “You even say ‘not’ with a British accent!”
  • Jess: “You two are awful!”
• Drake: A Gary-Stu Cyclonian written in by Rach as a love interest. He is later killed off by Fi and Mel, (still without Rach’s knowledge at the time of writing this) for being an annoying Gary-Stu. The chapter is aptly called “It HAD to happen”
• Ash: Fi’s Stalker.

Tropes used in Lost in Atmos include:

• Angst? What Angst?: Mel and Fi about Drake’s Death. But that could just be because they hate him.
• Anti-Hero: The Australians
• Australian Accent: The Girls
• Author Avatar: Kind of the plot of the story...
• Berserk Button: Do NOT mess with Mel’s Deidara plushie
• Common Mary Sue Traits: Just LOOK at Drake
• Crowning Moment of Awesome: Drake’s death... according to Fi and Mel anyway
• Crowning Moment of Funny: (Mel to Dark Ace) “Hey, you know how you are some old 30-something year old, and Cyclonis is a fifteen year old kid, doesn't that make you a paedophile?"...”You know, a Kiddy-Fiddler!”
• Emotionless Girl: When not involved with something to do with Deidara or tea, Mel
• Impossibly Cool Clothes: Fi’s boots, and perhaps even Dark Ace’s tutu
• Love At First Sight: Rach and Drake, maybe Finn and Fi, but knowing Finn....
• Marty Stu: Drake
• Murder Is the Best Solution: Mel
• Rouge Angles of Satin: Depends at what time of night parts of the story was written. Mel has misspelled Stork’s name as ‘Stalk’ on more than one occasion.
  • Unless that’s a badly failed attempt at humour...
• Self-Insert Fic: All three, and later four authors are main characters
• Tear Jerker:
  • Fi's familiy catching Swine Flu
  • The death of the ant

Story is ongoing. Fi and Mel also started providing their own commentary on episodes of Storm Hawks. Their You Tube channel can be found here: Enter at your own risk...